Paragraph Unit
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Lesson 2 Making
an Outline
Tennessee Standard - 6th Grade
Assessed - 6.spi.2.12 - Supply a missing piece of information in an outline.
After taking notes for a report the next step is to make an outline from the notes. Compare the outline below to the graphic organizer from Lesson 1.
Title of Paragraph
| Outline | Part of a Paragraph | Paragraph |
| I. Deadly yellow-spotted lizards | The main topic is used to build the topic sentence. | Yellow-spotted lizards are a deadly threat to all humans at Camp Green Lake. |
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Details First Point and Support |
They invaded the area after the life-giving lake dried up. Their bite is always fatal. |
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Details Second Point and Support |
It was a yellow-spotted lizard that killed Kate Barlow. |
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Details Third Point and Support |
The yellow-spotted lizards threatened Stanley and Zero while they were digging for Stanley's great-grandfather's suitcase. The reason Stanley and Zero survived is because they had eaten so many onions that the lizards, who do not like onion blood, did not wish to bite them. |
| Conclusion | Conclusion | With this one exception, meeting a yellow-spotted lizard at Camp Green Lake meant certain death. |
How to Make an Outline
Write a title that lets the reader know the subject of the report.
Main topics are listed using Roman numerals and periods.
Points or facts are listed under each topic using capital letters and periods.
Subtopics are extra information that is needed to clarify a point or fact. They are listed under each fact as needed. Subtopics are listed using lower case letters and periods.
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Questions
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Activity - Multiple Choice
Which piece of information is missing from the outline?
I. Juvenile Probation Camps Services
A. Provide educational services
B. Counseling
C.
D. Work experience
E. Recreational programsa) Average cost per ward in the youth facility is $32,000, compared to $22,000 per inmate in the Corrections Department
b) Most short term 3-6 months
c) Vocational training
d) Tough, violent places
Which piece of information is missing from the outline?
II. Negative Impacts of Youth Being Tried in Adult Courts
A. Given harsher penalties in adult court
B. Little or no rehabilitative programs
C. Criminal records hard to expunge, erase or strike out
D.
E. Could be denied military service
F. Youth held in adult facilities are more likely to return to a previous pattern of behaviora) Youth at a greater risk of being a victim in an adult jail or prison
b) In 2002, 2225 youth serving life without parole
c) Since 1999 the number of youth in adult prisons dropping
d) In Connecticut, North Carolina, and New York 16-year olds considered adults
When researching youth
being tried in the adult court system which is the least reliable source of
information?
a) a national newspaper
b) a book published by the National Council on Crime and Delinquency
c) a government website
d) a student's journal about life in prison
III. What are juvenile boot camps?
A. Correctional programs for delinquent youth in a military-style environment
B. Emphasize discipline
C. Stress physical conditioning
D.
E. Restricted to non-violent or first-time offendersa) Some researchers have found that boot camp graduates are more likely to be re-arrested
b) Staff has expressed concern that too many youth lack the maturity and self-control to succeed in a military-style program
c) Research proves that small, community-based programs are more successful and less expensive than correctional institutions
d) Rigorous alternative to longer terms of confinement in juvenile correctional facilities
Which piece of information is missing from the outline?
I. All Campers at Camp Green Lake have Real Names and Nicknames
A. Mr. Pendanski introduces Rex and Alan but their nicknames are X-Ray and Squid.
B.
C. Mr. Pendanski claims that Zero has his name due to the fact that there is nothing inside his head
D. Ricky's nickname is Zigzag
E. Magnet earned his nickname by his ability to steal
F. Theodore, known as Armpit, pushes Stanley to the floor when Stanley forgets to call him by his nickname
G. Mr. Pendanski is called "mom" by the boysa) Armpit seems to be one of X-Ray's closest companions
b) Zigzag is the weirdest kid at Camp Green Lake
c) Squid is as tough as X-Ray
d) José earns the nickname Magnet because of his ability to steal
Additional Practice
Using the information below to form an outline. (Save this outline for later use.)
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Suggested Headings for Main Topics:
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Gypsies
| traditionally nomadic people | dark-complexioned, short, and lightly built |
| travel in small caravans | blood groupings coincide with those of S Himalayan tribes |
| found on every continent | make living as metalworkers, singers, dancers, musicians, horse dealers, and auto mechanics - women as fortunetellers |
| estimated to number between 6 and 7 million | came originally from NW India |
| ruled by elders | unique language, called Romany - related to the languages of NW India |
| spread to every part of Europe by the beginning of the 16th century | arrived
in North America in the late 1800s |
| today great majority of Gypsies live in Eastern Europe | have particular folkways |
| usually adopted the religion of their country of residence |
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Source of Information:
Youth Detention Camps
http://ca.lwv.org/jj/detentio.htm
Fact Sheet
http://www.campaign4youthjustice.org/NCCDpaper.pdf
Juvenile Boot Camps
http://www.nmha.org/children/justjuv/bootcamp.cfm
Gypsies - Columbia Encyclopedia, Sixth Edition, Copyright (c) 2004
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Multiple Choice
c) Vocational training
a) Youth at a greater risk of being a victim in an adult jail or prison
d) a student's journal about life in prison
d) Rigorous alternative to longer terms of confinement in juvenile correctional facilities
c) Six to ten inches long
b) Land barren and desolate - not even weeds
d) José earns the nickname Magnet because of his ability to steal