Lesson 4 - Figurative Language
Figurative language is used when a
writer describes something using comparisons that go beyond literal meaning. The
words mean more than what they say on the surface. This gives the writing a
fresh look at a common subject. Figurative language is not meant to be
interpreted in a word by word sense. The objects that are being compared are
different in enough ways so that their similarities, when pointed out, are
interesting, unique and/or surprising. Figurative language is used in poetry and
fiction, as well as in everyday speech. Below are three types of figurative
language:
Metaphor

Joe is a nut.
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A metaphor is a figure of
speech comparing two unlike things that have something in common. The
comparison is made without the use of like or as.
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His stomach tightened into a
series of rolling knots and his breath came in short bursts. . .
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Personification

The paddle pounded the
ball.
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Personification is when an author gives an idea, object,
or animal qualities or traits of a person.
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Hatchet Page 26 The plane went
into a glide, a very fast glide that ate altitude, and suddenly there
weren't any lakes. |
Simile

Bob swam like a fish.
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- A simile is a comparison between two
unlike things that have something in common. A simile always uses the
words like or as to make a comparison.
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And now a jolt took him like
a hammerblow, so forcefully that he seemed to crush back into the seat. .
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Activity 1
Determine which type of figurative
language is used for each item below.
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He seemed more a machine than a man, an extension of the plane.
...the pilot seemed the same way. Part of the plane, not human.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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The pilot did not move except that his head rolled on a neck impossibly
loose as the plane hit a small bit of turbulence.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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The plane, committed now to landing, to crashing, fell into the wide
place like a stone, and Brian eased back on the wheel and braced himself
for the crash.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
- Page 31 - The memory was like a knife cutting into him.
Slicing deep into him with hate.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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He tried to move, but pain hammered into him and made his breath
shorten into gasps and he stopped, his legs still in the water.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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Be asleep, his mind screamed at the pilot.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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With it came some warmth, small bits of it at first, and with the heat came
clouds of insects-thick, swarming hordes of mosquitoes that flocked
to his body, made a living coat on his exposed skin, clogged his
nostrils when he inhaled, poured into his mouth when he opened it to take a
breath.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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And when the sun was fully up and heating him directly, bringing steam off
of his wet clothes and bathing him with warmth, the mosquitoes and flies
disappeared. Almost that suddenly. One minute he was sitting in the middle
of a swarm; the next, they were gone and the sun was on him.
Vampires, he
thought.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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But there was a log extending about twenty feet out into the water of the
lake - a beaver drop from some time before - with old limbs
sticking up, almost like handles.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
- Page 54 - Gradually, like sloshing oil his thoughts settled
back and the panic was gone.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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The slender branches went up about twenty feet and were heavy, drooping with
clusters of bright red berries. They were half as big as grapes but hung
in bunches much like grapes and when Brian saw them, glistening red in
the sunlight, he almost yelled.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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He was dirty and starving and bitten and hurt and lonely and ugly and afraid
and so completely miserable that it was like being in a pit, a dark,
deep pit with no way out.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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He wiped his mouth and tried to move his leg, which had stiffened like
wood.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
- Page 88 - Not twenty feet to his right, leaning out over the water were birches and
he stood looking at them for a full half-minute before they registered on
his mind. They were beautiful white and bark like clean, slightly
speckled paper.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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Then back to work, the sun on his back, until at last he had a ball of
fluff as big as a grapefruit - dry birchbark fluff.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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The red glow moved from the sparks themselves into the bark, moved and grew
and became worms, glowing red worms that crawled up the bark hairs
and caught other threads of bark and grew until there was a pocket of red as
big as a quarter, a glowing red coal of heat.
| became worms, glowing red worms
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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big as a quarter a)
metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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But the flames were thick and oily and burning fast, consuming the ball of
bark as fast as if it were gasoline.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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I have a friend, he thought - I have a friend now. A hungry friend, but a
good one. I have a friend named fire.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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He reached into the nest and pulled the eggs out one at a time. There were
seventeen of them, each as round as a ball, and white.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
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From his height he could see not just the lake but across part of the
forest, a green carpet, and it was full of life.
a) metaphor
b) personification
c) simile
Flash Cards
http://www.mce.k12tn.net/survival/hatchet/descriptive/figurative_lang_terms.htm
Oral Practice
http://www.mce.k12tn.net/survival/hatchet/oral.doc
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